Book Review 1-5 (The Secret Garden)

Although this story is written about the garden mainly, it begins from past of one girl. Mary Lennoxis ugly and she has an ill. Her parents died when Mary is ten years old, and she went to her uncle's house after her parents died. Her uncle's house is very large and old. There are many gardens around his house, and some gardens are surrounded with tall walls. After a few months later, Mary is made frends with two boys in here. Mary was not interested in everything before, but she became interested in them and these gardens little by little. As gardens were in ruins, they often worked in order to creat a beautiful gardens. One day, Mary found an old key in garden. She thought for a minute, she remembered that there is the. door the top of hill. She inserted a key into the door immediatly, and she opened the door. It was extended clean scene there. This story was interesting and it is easy to read for me!! If you like happy story, Please try to read this book! You will notice importance of having interested in something.

The Rainy Day

Today is not good day. When I woke up at seven o' clock, it was heavy rain. I went to university with wet clothes. I don't like rainy days.

Snake Snake Snake !!!!!!

Yesterday, I got back home as usual at five o'clock. I have two ways in order to go outside. One is usual road, the other way is not concreat. I went through this way, I found something to long. At first, I thought that this is a leaf, it was not a leaf. It was snake!! "Wow, Oh my god~!!" I said in my heart when I saw this snake. Although it looked slept, it was very uncomfortable. I don't want to see snake.

Essay 2 (correction) Description of Objects

I have two favorite objects. Firstly, I'll discuss about colors. We can see many kinds of color around us. If we go to forests, we'll be able to see dark green mainly. I'll call it "The stage of green". There are much beautiful greens in forests. If we go to sea, we'll be able to see blue and beige. The blue of water and the beige of sand are very good match. I feel as if these are nice conbination.

In night time, we can see only black except lights of night scene. I think that the black is emphasized in night time, and the night is mysterious compared to day time.

Secondly, I'll discuss about clothes. I became interested in clothes when I was sixteen years old. At first, I thought that we wear clothes only to protect our body, but I found that it is not only to protect but also to dress myself.

In fact, we have a common sense about fasion. they are TPO which called Time, Place, Occasion. We usually choose clothes for each situations. Although the common sense is very important, having informal style is important in order to express myself well. I want to become a person who has common sense and flexibility!

Now, we have much objects include colors and clothes. Although these are not related directly, we touch them somewhere in our life. I discussed about colors and clothes mainly, I think that I should increase favorite objects more and more to spent fruitful life.

Essay 1 (correction) My Favorite Things

Hello! My name is Yuuki Ishioka. I'm a student at Kumamoto Gakuen University. I major in English. I'll introduce about my favorite things.

Firstly, I love cars very much. I like middle size and light 4WD which called 4 Wheel Drive in particular. Although the 4WD is usually heavy, there are some 4WD these days. Accoding to my observation, I found that the light 4WD is swifter than large size 4WD. The swift and tough cars are attractive for me.

Secondly, I like music very much. I often listen to music when I want to relax. Recently, I listen to Hip Hop and ballads mainly. When I want to go outside, I usually listen to HipHop. In contrast, I listen to ballads when I have sad things or I want to relax. Listening to music is my best hobby. Sometimes, I talk about music and musicians with my friends.

Except these favorite things, I also like to go cycling. I'll go outside whenever fine day. I can feel comfortable wind. Nice to meet you!!

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